List the characters and describe them
Monte - Alcoholic and a chemical engineer. He blamed his self for Vicky's death. He wants to drink his self to death. Vicky - Mother of Tommy. Was suppose to be clean, but was doing cocaine. She drown. Dave - Girls volleyball coach. Hooked on meth and alcohol. Total denial about his addiction. Angie - Meth - Very sick, delusional. She tried to commit suicide, when she was in rehab.
Find one word that describes a character in your book very well. Give five reasons for your choice of words.
Diseased - Drank and least a half gallon a day. Took pills. Drank Listerine, when he didn't have liquor. Wanted to die. Didn't care how he lived or who he hurt.
If you could rewrite the ending, would you?
No, I wouldn't rewrite it. It was perfect as it was.
Disclosure: I received a review copy of this book from the author.